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To reach the heart of yours

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Praying for you near me,
i dont want to be alone no more,
can you hear the beating,
of this already broken heart,
can you hear it calling, calling out your name,
whenever the raindrops are falling,
but then fading away.
Praying for you near me,
i dont want to be alone no more,
my eternal soul is calling
to reach the heart of yours,
your lovers heart is dying,
please hear her beckon call
The warmth of you shes needing
the touch of you she breathes
she knew you could hear her calling, and knew you were on your way
i'm looking out there for you,
my eyes are wide awake
your lovers soul is bleeding,
please bid me sweet goodnight,
i hear your heart is pounding,
when we both come into sight,
it seems like we're falling,
but you're more close to me now than ever before
I can feel your graceful healing,
seeping into my wounds, your lovers heart is breathing,
in every breath of your soul.
Well this was different at a time, different to what i was used to writing, but i like the change and the variety with things, so it may seem a little strange and wobbly in places and not completely make sense, but i understand what this piece means, and just wnt to make it so other people can see it if they wish
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EgyptianWolf's avatar
Wow. That's really beautiful. Just a tip, use apitals, and other punctuation then a comma. :D ^^; And, try stanzas, they really help the reader see it. Otherwise, your really good. Some grammar mistakes, but, who doesn't make those! :D